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Re: More than emotion but less than a life
The title, in my opinion, says the most here. It really is well put. I like the, for the most part, subtle rhyming. Lengthening the stanzas with a bit more ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Slavery
For the most part it's really nice, but I feel like you should have more to it. Because it's so short, and like you said, a little cliche, adding on ...
Oct 15, 2007